The Conveniences and Dangers of the Internet
Nowadays people carry
out their activities quickly and practically. All humanitarian activities are
assisted by the internet. The internet is a communication network that connects
one electronic media to another. In this essay, some of the advantages and
disadvantages of internet use will be explained.
The advantages of the
internet are very helpful in modern life, but there are also dangers from
internet use. In the world of education, the internet has an effect that causes
students to be lazy and immediately search the internet without trying it
first. This also results in a lot of plagiarism, students will immediately
copy-paste from the internet without using their own language. The internet as
a communication medium has an impact on one's personality socially. Someone
will be individualist and closed, more concerned with the people found on
social media so that the far feels close and close to feels far away. In the
economic field, fraudulent crime is rampant. For example, the product has been
paid for but not arrived. This happens because the transaction does not occur
directly.
In summary, although the advantages of the internet are very used in human activities, the internet is also dangerous. The danger of the internet can affect human personality to be lazy and individualistic human beings, and also cause a lot of fraud. In my opinion, it is fine to use the internet in our daily life, provided we can use it positively and reduce excessive use.
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BalasHapusThe Conveniences and Dangers of the Internet
Nowadays people carry out their activities quickly and practically. All humanitarian activities are assisted by the internet. The internet is a communication network that connects one electronic media to another. In this essay some of the advantages and disadvantages of internet use will be explained.
The internet provides great benefits for education, communication, and economics. The internet as an educational medium provides complete information and knowledge. Various information from all over the world can be found by accessing the internet. This information is provided in the form of words or images. The internet as a communication medium makes communication easy. Because of it humans can meet face to face even with people far away, just by typing numbers or usernames as long as there are pulses and internet connections. In the economy, the internet helps promote and online business transactions, so people don't have to go to the store directly.
The adventages of the internet are very helpful in modern life, but there are also dangers from internet use. In the world of education, the internet has an effect that causes students to be lazy and immediately search the internet without trying it first. As a result, there is a lot of plagiarism, students will immediately copy-paste from the internet without using their own language. The internet as a communication medium has an impact on one's personality socially. Someone will be individualist and closed, more concerned with the people found on social media so that the far feels close and close to feels far away. In the economic field, fraudulent crime is rampant. For example, the product has been paid for but not arrived. This happens because the transaction does not occur directly.
Conversely, although the advantages of the internet are very used in human activities, the internet is also dangerous. The danger of the internet can affect human personality to be lazy and individualistic human beings, and also cause a lot of fraud. In my opinion, it is fine to use the internet to our daily life, provided we can use it positively and reduce excessive use.