Paragraph to Essay
A. Outline of the essay
I.
Introductory Paragraph
Every weekend people
will spend a lot of time at home doing activities that cannot be done on a
normal day, such as exercising, cooking class, or watching the drama in a
marathon. Likewise with family, every weekend all my family members stay at
home, so we spend the weekend cleaning the house together. My family is my team
in cleaning the house.
Thesis statement: My
father, my mother, me and my siblings had our own task in cleaning the house.
II.
Body
A.
Paragraph 1: My Father’s task
Topic
sentences: My father is always in charge of cleaning the garage, car, and park
behind the house
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Major support 1: It’s about car garage
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Minor Support
Our car's garage is not so wide.
There are many things in there besides
car.
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Major support 2: My father really care
to our car
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Minor support
Father cleans the car regularly.
Father uses soap and various things to
make the car shiny and fragrant.
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Major support 3: It’s about garden
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Minor support
Father would sweep the garden behind the
house, cut grass, and water the plants.
Concluding sentences: My father is a
good person, so he always wants to help clean the house.
B. Paragraph
2: My mother’s task
Topic sentences: My mother cleaned
their bedroom, family room, and kitchen room
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Major support 1: Mother cleaned mom and
dads bedroom
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Minor support
Mother
is the one who has the right to take care of their bedroom.
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Major support 2: Mother cleaned the
family room
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Minor support
Mother
will make sure there is no dust and dirt left behind.
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Major support 3: Mother cleaned the
kitchen room
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Minor support
Mother
cleaned the kitchen room and the kitchen tools too.
Concluding
sentences: Mother worked on a task that she believed could only be done by her.
C. Paragraph
3: I and My Siblings task
Topic sentences: I and my siblings
were tasked with cleaning our bedrooms, bathrooms and living rooms.
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Major support 1: I and my siblings
cleaned our own bedroom
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Minor support
We
manage our own bedroom from folding blankets to sweeping and mopping.
Now
cleaned our own bedroom is our habit.
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Major support 2: My brother cleaned
bathroom
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Minor support
He
cleaning the bathroom starting from brushing the floor, to drain the tubs.
Tubs
are drained regularly.
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Major support 3: My sister and I cleaned
the living room
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Minor support
Our family room is quite large, so my sister and I work together to clean up.
My
sister and I share the task.
Concluding
sentences: We usually share the task, so so our work will be easier and
faster.
III.
Concluding
Paragraph
In summary, my family really cares about the
cleanliness of the house. We share the task so that the job of cleaning the
house is easier and faster. In sharing tasks everything is done well.
B. Essay
Every weekend people will spend a
lot of time at home doing activities that cannot be done on a normal day, such
as exercising, cooking class, or watching the drama in a marathon. Likewise
with family, every weekend all my family members stay at home, so we spend the
weekend cleaning the house together. My family is my team in cleaning the
house. My father, my mother, me and my siblings have our own duty in cleaning
the house.
My father is always in charge of cleaning the
garage, car, and park behind the house. Our car's garage is not so wide that’s
why my father cleaned it himself. In addition to saving the car, we also save
some items there, when the garage is cleaned the items must be moved. Dad wants
to clean the garage because he wants to clean the car also. Dad routinely takes
care of the car once a week and he is very fond of our car. He will use a lot
of foamy coir, and also something special to make the car look shiny, besides
that he will use fragrance in the car which he thinks is fragrant even though
it always makes a headache, LoL. Dad also had the task of cleaning the garden
behind the house, he would sweep the garden behind the house, cut grass, and
water the plants. My father is a good person, so he always wants to help clean
the house.
My
mother cleaned their bedroom, family room, and kitchen room. Mom cleans the
bedroom for dad and her because according to her she is the one who has the
right to take care of it. In the family room, the mom will sweep, mop, and also
clean the furniture from dust. Moms is also tasked with cleaning the kitchen,
from cleaning the kitchen to cooking tools. In our family, mom is people who
know the kitchen very well. . Mom is very careful and clean so she will make
sure there is no dust and dirt left behind.
I
and my siblings were tasked with cleaning our bedrooms, bathrooms and living
rooms. Since childhood, we have been taught to manage our own bedrooms, from
folding blankets to sweeping and mopping, now we are independent and that has
become a habit. We also change bed linen regularly. After we clean our own
bedroom, my brother will clean the bathroom. He was in charge of cleaning the
bathroom starting from brushing the floor, to drain the bathtub. We routinely
drain the bathtub to maintain the cleanliness of the water and also not to
become a breeding ground for mosquitoes. My sister and I will clean the living
room. The living room in our house is quite large so it takes two people to
clean up. We usually share the task, my sister is sweeping and I'm mopping, my
sister is cleaning the dust and I'm cleaning the cobwebs, my sister is cleaning
the window glass and I'm changing the curtains so our work will be easier and
faster.
My family believes that a clean and neat house will be comfortable to live in and
make people who live in it healthy and happy. All family members always do
their job well, because we support each other, for example, mom and dad always
praise when our room is clean and neat. My family has our own duty to clean the
house, like a team that has its own duties, that's why my family is my team in
cleaning the house.
