Outline of the Essay
Topic: The impact of globalization on gender equality
Support Sentence 1: Not
only men can be leaders but women too.
Support Sentence 2: Women
have the opportunity to pursue education as high as possible.
Support Sentence 3: Globalization
provides space for women to work and be creative.
Concluding Sentence: In summary, globalization changes many things
about the differences between men and women such as women can be leaders, women
can have a high education, and women can work like a man.
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BalasHapusI love this topic .. definitely a lot things woman can do after the gender equality
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BalasHapusIn overall you outline was great you dont talk to many thing. you keep it to the core
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BalasHapuscan't wait for your next essay , good luck
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