My Family is My Team

Paragraph to Essay

A. Outline of the essay

            

I.                    Introductory Paragraph

Every weekend people will spend a lot of time at home doing activities that cannot be done on a normal day, such as exercising, cooking class, or watching the drama in a marathon. Likewise with family, every weekend all my family members stay at home, so we spend the weekend cleaning the house together. My family is my team in cleaning the house.

Thesis statement: My father, my mother, me and my siblings had our own task in cleaning the house.

II.                Body

A.    Paragraph 1: My Father’s task

Topic sentences: My father is always in charge of cleaning the garage, car, and park behind the house

·         Major support 1: It’s about car garage

-          Minor Support

Our car's garage is not so wide.

There are many things in there besides car.

·         Major support 2: My father really care to our car

-          Minor support

Father cleans the car regularly.

Father uses soap and various things to make the car shiny and fragrant.

·         Major support 3: It’s about garden

-          Minor support

Father would sweep the garden behind the house, cut grass, and water the plants.

Concluding sentences: My father is a good person, so he always wants to help clean the house.

B.     Paragraph 2: My mother’s task

Topic sentences: My mother cleaned their bedroom, family room, and kitchen room

·         Major support 1: Mother cleaned mom and dads bedroom

-          Minor support

Mother is the one who has the right to take care of their bedroom.

·         Major support 2: Mother cleaned the family room

-          Minor support

Mother will make sure there is no dust and dirt left behind.

·         Major support 3: Mother cleaned the kitchen room

-          Minor support

Mother cleaned the kitchen room and the kitchen tools too.

                        Concluding sentences: Mother worked on a task that she believed could only be done by her.

C.     Paragraph 3: I and My Siblings task

Topic sentences: I and my siblings were tasked with cleaning our bedrooms, bathrooms and living rooms.

·         Major support 1: I and my siblings cleaned our own bedroom

-          Minor support

We manage our own bedroom from folding blankets to sweeping and mopping.

Now cleaned our own bedroom is our habit.

·         Major support 2: My brother cleaned bathroom

-          Minor support

He cleaning the bathroom starting from brushing the floor, to drain the tubs.

Tubs are drained regularly.

·         Major support 3: My sister and I cleaned the living room

-          Minor support

Our family room is quite large, so my sister and I work together to clean up.

My sister and I share the task.

Concluding sentences: We usually share the task, so so our work will be easier and faster.

III.             Concluding Paragraph

In summary, my family really cares about the cleanliness of the house. We share the task so that the job of cleaning the house is easier and faster. In sharing tasks everything is done well.

B. Essay 

Every weekend people will spend a lot of time at home doing activities that cannot be done on a normal day, such as exercising, cooking class, or watching the drama in a marathon. Likewise with family, every weekend all my family members stay at home, so we spend the weekend cleaning the house together. My family is my team in cleaning the house. My father, my mother, me and my siblings have our own duty in cleaning the house.

My father is always in charge of cleaning the garage, car, and park behind the house. Our car's garage is not so wide that’s why my father cleaned it himself. In addition to saving the car, we also save some items there, when the garage is cleaned the items must be moved. Dad wants to clean the garage because he wants to clean the car also. Dad routinely takes care of the car once a week and he is very fond of our car. He will use a lot of foamy coir, and also something special to make the car look shiny, besides that he will use fragrance in the car which he thinks is fragrant even though it always makes a headache, LoL. Dad also had the task of cleaning the garden behind the house, he would sweep the garden behind the house, cut grass, and water the plants. My father is a good person, so he always wants to help clean the house.

 My mother cleaned their bedroom, family room, and kitchen room. Mom cleans the bedroom for dad and her because according to her she is the one who has the right to take care of it. In the family room, the mom will sweep, mop, and also clean the furniture from dust. Moms is also tasked with cleaning the kitchen, from cleaning the kitchen to cooking tools. In our family, mom is people who know the kitchen very well. . Mom is very careful and clean so she will make sure there is no dust and dirt left behind.

 I and my siblings were tasked with cleaning our bedrooms, bathrooms and living rooms. Since childhood, we have been taught to manage our own bedrooms, from folding blankets to sweeping and mopping, now we are independent and that has become a habit. We also change bed linen regularly. After we clean our own bedroom, my brother will clean the bathroom. He was in charge of cleaning the bathroom starting from brushing the floor, to drain the bathtub. We routinely drain the bathtub to maintain the cleanliness of the water and also not to become a breeding ground for mosquitoes. My sister and I will clean the living room. The living room in our house is quite large so it takes two people to clean up. We usually share the task, my sister is sweeping and I'm mopping, my sister is cleaning the dust and I'm cleaning the cobwebs, my sister is cleaning the window glass and I'm changing the curtains so our work will be easier and faster.

 My family believes that a clean and neat house will be comfortable to live in and make people who live in it healthy and happy. All family members always do their job well, because we support each other, for example, mom and dad always praise when our room is clean and neat. My family has our own duty to clean the house, like a team that has its own duties, that's why my family is my team in cleaning the house.